Enviado por Víctor Manuel Rollón el 10.10.10/20:15

I was born in Madrid in a cold winter. I'm 15 years old and I have lived all my life in Villalba. When I was a child I went to the school opposite my house and now I go to the high-school near my house. I live with my parents Raquel and Juan Luis and my brother Luismi. My grandparents live in Galicia and I usually go all summers to visit them. I like going out with my friends and playing basketball. Also, I like watching TV. I hate people who speak badly of other people. When I am older, I want to be a mechanic in my father's garage.

Your composition is very good, Víctor. There were only a couple of mistakes. Very well done.